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« on: February 25, 2010, 07:26:10 AM »
Unfinished, Any feedback would be appreciated, Trying to finish this  :zzz:





God damn it's insane, Tryin to make all my days free of pain,
Tryin to make all my days free of pain 'till I can be the main, reason you smile
The reason you keep goin, the reason you're happy inside,
Hold your head up , Walk with pride, Hurt but never cry,
Live and never die, Just take my hand, I'll take you to paradise,
A second chance at life, I'll show you another side, Not the pain and suffering you
once knew, But something completly new, me and you, we'll turn the tide
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Re: Poem
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2010, 01:46:00 PM »
lol what an emo.
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« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2010, 03:41:15 PM »
k.
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